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Vreleks The Alurhsa Word for Constructed: Creativity in both scripts and languages
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Tolkien_Freak

Joined: 26 Jul 2007 Posts: 319 Location: Eira
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Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 3:02 am Post subject: TC: Bring Out Your Dead |
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In the spirit of Eldin's latest challenge, here's another Monty Python one:
English:
-Bring out your dead!
-Here's one.
-Nine pence.
-I'm not dead!
-What?
-Nothing -- here's your nine pence.
-I'm not dead!
-Here -- he says he's not dead!
-Yes, he is.
-I'm not!
-He isn't?
-Well, he will be soon, he's very ill.
-I'm getting better!
-No, you're not, you'll be stone dead in a moment.
-Oh, I can't take him like that -- it's against regulations.
-I don't want to go on the cart!
-Oh, don't be such a baby.
-I can't take him...
-I feel fine!
-Oh, do us a favor...
-I can't.
-Well, can you hang around a couple of minutes? He won't be long.
-Naaah, I got to go on to Robinson's -- they've lost nine today.
-Well, when is your next round?
-Thursday.
-I think I'll go for a walk!
-You're not fooling anyone, y'know. Look, isn't there something you can do?
-I feel happy... I feel happy!
[whop]
-Ah, thanks very much.
-Not at all. See you on Thursday.
-Right, see you Thursday.
(yeah, it's long)
Raitoliste:
-ri ud lysazuỳ!
-Athe reimi.
-Uwthak.
-Ua w udi!
-Stai?
-Rustei - ri uwthaky.
-Ua w udi!
-Ei - o stw ua o udi!
-Ia, ia o.
-Ua w!
-Ra ua o?
-Ei, ni itani, ia o utadi.
-Ẃno ygetatasw!
-Ua, ua no, ni ia udi itani.
-Ei, ua zẃ o lysazw ii reite - e zsteotu.
-Ua vẃ sw skeome!
-Ei, ua t iinale.
-Ua zẃ o lysazw...
-W hw eti!
-Ei, etazwi u eogi...
-Ua zẃ.
-Reini, ra z usw itani? Ua ni otane ozw.
-Uaai, zẃ sw Rominẃsonogi - ǿnua uwthal uwzw reinihni.
-ri ygathaze na?
-Ythihani.
-W vw ẃni sw szeoio!
-Ua no ryle wviazw, i'evw. Ihwi, ra z rizw?
-W hw etavahi! W hw etavahi!
[tia-]
-Ei, ia risiai.
-Uai, uai. Niihw ythihani.
-Ia, niihw ythihani. _________________ 'We are the knights who say, "に!"'
今に遊べているゼルダー黄昏の姫君を。凄い!! |
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Vortex

Joined: 10 Feb 2008 Posts: 54
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Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 12:00 am Post subject: |
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Ná Paleálamemye maetyáhngu!
Hwílatlanil.
Áuntoy pénch
Ngué maetyáseq méwak!
Téo?
Íliqua – áuntoy pénchanu hwílatlan.
Ngué maetyáseq méwak!
Tlán – lúan syémasyo khómyan.
Mpáe, án semasy maetyáseq !
Ngué maetyáseq méwak-méwak!
Án maetyáseq méwak, qyáq.
Huuu, án phámaetyáneam.
Kílaympa oápikyánna!
Híqu, cuhási khóminua, semasy phómaetyákuenua.
Éh, palémao híqu weátanna nímin maetyáyoasy yúhihur.
Nyenuakha ifén uálamwe!
Éhhh, miléliqua cyaendé náhi lípayma.
Palémao híqu weátanna…
Kílaympáuluwe!
Ísalanu ná nántoy, náhlay.
Tlí námmao hiqu weátawe.
Éhhh, káyyena pálatuyena makó hwílatlan hwílanua, qyáq? Cúha
Néééh, ríhatakha Rópinsonyena álammatan ryútiwe nímin áuntoyhoa tliták maetyáseq.
Éhhh, áso álantaqanwe, qyáq?
Myópyutak.
Tli phatúntuku, nghoatíwe
I still have more to translate but This is the majority of it. I fanyone wants the gloss and pronunciation I will be happy to post it. |
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eldin raigmore
Joined: 03 May 2007 Posts: 550 Location: SouthEast Michigan
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Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 9:07 pm Post subject: |
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Gloss, for sure! (As soon as you can get around to it -- no pressure.) I think we all want these in every Translation Challenge.
Pronunciation, when someone else asks for it too, when you can get around to it. Most people probably like these too, though I don't know that everyone thinks they're required.
Orthography (your language's native script) would also be good; probably, given the nature of this bboard, higher-priority than the pronunciation. Maybe higher than the gloss, too, though actually without the gloss it would just be a bunch of pretty marks. (On another bboard, without the "conscript" emphasis Vreleksa has, writing it in your conscript might not be considered so important.)
and BTW: Thanks! _________________ Therefore love the child who holds your hand; and let your wife delight in your embrace; for this is the lot of mankind to enjoy:
But immortal life is not for men. |
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