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eldin raigmore Admin

Joined: 03 May 2007 Posts: 1621 Location: SouthEast Michigan
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Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2007 7:50 pm Post subject: "A Tale of Ung", a story by Thomas Keyes |
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Who else here has seen the story A Tale of Ung?
Do you have any advice, comments, compliments, or questions?
What do you think of his conworld? |
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Aeetlrcreejl

Joined: 08 Jun 2007 Posts: 839 Location: Over yonder
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Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2007 8:09 pm Post subject: |
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Mizithra. _________________ Iwocwá ĵọṭãsák.
/iwotSwa_H d`Z`Ot`~asa_Hk/
[iocwa_H d`Z`Ot`_h~a_Hk] |
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eldin raigmore Admin

Joined: 03 May 2007 Posts: 1621 Location: SouthEast Michigan
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Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2007 9:23 pm Post subject: |
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Aeetlrcreejl wrote: | Mizithra. | What does that mean? Unpasteurized goat-or-sheep cheese? |
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Aeetlrcreejl

Joined: 08 Jun 2007 Posts: 839 Location: Over yonder
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Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2007 10:08 pm Post subject: |
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Not in my conlang. _________________ Iwocwá ĵọṭãsák.
/iwotSwa_H d`Z`Ot`~asa_Hk/
[iocwa_H d`Z`Ot`_h~a_Hk] |
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langover94
Joined: 21 Aug 2007 Posts: 509 Location: USA
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Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2007 11:40 pm Post subject: |
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never read it _________________ Join us at: The Renewed Spirits Forum!
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yssida

Joined: 16 Sep 2007 Posts: 253 Location: sa jaan lang
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Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 4:13 am Post subject: |
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I don't know, it is very weird as far as the story is concerned. Queen Udi looks nice, wonder where he might have gotten the photo. The language is nice especially the 'no abstract words' part, but 500 pages? Oh no, can't handle that ATM. _________________ kasabot ka ani? aw di tingali ka bisaya mao na
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eldin raigmore Admin

Joined: 03 May 2007 Posts: 1621 Location: SouthEast Michigan
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Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 5:23 pm Post subject: |
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eldin raigmore wrote: | Aeetlrcreejl wrote: | Mizithra. | What does that mean? Unpasteurized goat-or-sheep cheese? |
Aeetlrcreejl wrote: | Not in my conlang. | What's it mean in your conlang? And which conlang? (I thought you had more than one. Even if you only have one, what's its name?) Should I have been able to translate "Mizithra" based on what you've already posted? |
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Aeetlrcreejl

Joined: 08 Jun 2007 Posts: 839 Location: Over yonder
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Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 10:01 pm Post subject: |
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eldin raigmore wrote: | eldin raigmore wrote: | Aeetlrcreejl wrote: | Mizithra. | What does that mean? Unpasteurized goat-or-sheep cheese? |
Aeetlrcreejl wrote: | Not in my conlang. | What's it mean in your conlang? And which conlang? (I thought you had more than one. Even if you only have one, what's its name?) Should I have been able to translate "Mizithra" based on what you've already posted? |
It's in Foron. It's a filler word. Mizithra sounds cool. So does Mizrahim. _________________ Iwocwá ĵọṭãsák.
/iwotSwa_H d`Z`Ot`~asa_Hk/
[iocwa_H d`Z`Ot`_h~a_Hk] |
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eldin raigmore Admin

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Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 10:12 pm Post subject: |
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Aeetlrcreejl wrote: | It's in Foron. It's a filler word. Mizithra sounds cool. So does Mizrahim. | Isn't "Mizrahim" Hebrew for "Egyptians"? If it isn't, shouldn't it be? |
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Aeetlrcreejl

Joined: 08 Jun 2007 Posts: 839 Location: Over yonder
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Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 10:14 pm Post subject: |
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It means "east". _________________ Iwocwá ĵọṭãsák.
/iwotSwa_H d`Z`Ot`~asa_Hk/
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eldin raigmore Admin

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Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 10:25 pm Post subject: |
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Aeetlrcreejl wrote: | It means "east". | In Hebrew?
Google gives me:
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Aeetlrcreejl

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Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 10:43 pm Post subject: |
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East, eastern, something like that... _________________ Iwocwá ĵọṭãsák.
/iwotSwa_H d`Z`Ot`~asa_Hk/
[iocwa_H d`Z`Ot`_h~a_Hk] |
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langover94
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Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 9:06 pm Post subject: |
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i would read it if i could understand it _________________ Join us at: The Renewed Spirits Forum!
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