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Tolkien_Freak · Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 1:40 am Post subject: TC: Ue wo Muite Arukou

Thanks for the idea to Eldin-sama.

Japanese:
上を向いて歩こう
涙がこぼれないように
思い出す春の日
一人ぼっちの夜
ue wo muite arukou
namida ga koborenai you ni
omoidasu haru no hi
hitoribocchi no yoru

English:
I will walk facing up
so that the tears don't spill out
I remember a spring day / (possibly) the spring day I remember
a lonely night

Emitare:
toriya ö yalu aga
sjirögaturia öse
kevero ö elhinilhe irilhe
lesue esa

walk 1sg[ACT] look-and up[STAT]
spill-NOM-CAUSAL tear[STAT]
remember 1sg[STAT] spring-DESCGEN day-STAT
alone-ATT night
(Age is used like Japanese ue, it's a noun.
Causal case is used to indicate the reason or purpose for something.)

Hemicomputer · Joined: 04 Feb 2008 Posts: 610 Location: Calgary, Alberta

Holxws:
Sóni iyöt ovnált tó jéul
Gw ahnev úenliryé kra
Jî júvan menxe cag matúl
Jî dalm homws

/"soni i"jot "OvnAlt to "Ze@l
NU "{RnEB wEn"li4je k4{
ZOI "Zuv{n "mEnXE S{N m{tul
ZOI D{lm "ROmUks/

sky towards look-GERUND FUT go-1
the.PL tear-PL NEG-spill for
a day spring in remember-1
a night one-ADJ

EDIT: Checked my lexicon. The translation is now complete.

Drumu:
Skuvruniusazak nahlafta
Audimibihüd hegelaftuv
Periluvi gesilifa
Lekünespu

/skuvRuniusazak naxlafta
audimibixyd hENElaftuv
pERiluvi NEsilifa
lEkynEspu/

up-DAT-sight-INS walk-FUT-1
tear-PL-NEG-CAUS rain-FUT-NEG
spring-day know-ETERNAL.FUT-1
alone-night
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kyonides · Joined: 28 Aug 2008 Posts: 301

Spanish:
Caminaré con la frente en alto
para que las lágrimas no se derramen
recuerdo un día de primavera / (tal vez) el día de primavera que recuerdo
una noche solitaria

Kexyana:
Noe minanse shesreon
rash Eridsoen dezaelsos nin
noskloeron nivo Reo Kledere / Kledereo,
nivo seinodena Laya

I to walk-FUT-1PERS to see the top-GER
for-what tears plummet-FUT-SUBJ-3PERS not
to remember-PRES-1PERS one day spring / spring-day
one lonely night

I hope I understood what the meaning of the Japanese poem, but the English translation could be misleading, who knows?
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eldin raigmore · Posted: Sat Jul 18, 2009 8:44 pm Post subject:

This is supposed to be the original singer singing it, (a good 25 or 30 years after first making it a hit, AIUI).

Here are the lyrics:

Tolkien_Freak · Posted: Sat Jul 18, 2009 9:50 pm Post subject:

That music style does NOT go with those lyrics.

Here's a bit better translation (by me ^_^):

achemel · Joined: 29 Mar 2009 Posts: 556 Location: up for debate

It's a good translation, T_F. (^_^)

And you're right, the music and the lyrics are a bit... clashy. XD He looks so happy, though! Maybe he's trying to make you think positive, or just listen to the music or something...
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Kiri · Joined: 13 Jun 2009 Posts: 471 Location: Latvia/Italy

Vaijerīna:

ar an allonetan Fontru wadue,
lond Fleas ba amire.
an Venēro Swu memu.
an laniran Farswa...

Tolkien_Freak · Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 7:47 pm Post subject:

Hemicomputer · Joined: 04 Feb 2008 Posts: 610 Location: Calgary, Alberta

Drumu update!

Skobrunesetul nakrasta
Odikibihud hanalastuv,
Periluvi kesilita ~
Lakunespos.

Script & gloss soon!
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eldin raigmore · Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2011 2:20 pm Post subject: