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Forna Edlâm (The Tree of Life)

 
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:59 am    Post subject: Forna Edlâm (The Tree of Life) Reply with quote

Forna Edlâm
Conelumỏro rus fornail Edlâm elegațvỉ nun.
Ỉsỏro san quâna corbis elegațvỉ nun,
Lac helcurỏrĉ ilsenvỉ nun.
Lețânu helcurỏro lânvỉ đân, sỏlỏrĉ parmelvỉ nun.
Ronol conelumỏro elegațvỉ nun,
Lac ronol helcurỏro ilsenâr lârvỉ nun.
Parmelỏro hâlỏrĉ lârvỉ đân,
Lac elm parmelỏro daâr lârvỉ đân: talc lârvỉ elater đân.
Bâțil corsỏro locorsvỉ nun.

The Tree of Life
Leaves fall from the tree of Life.
They fall into the river of the world,
And make ripples.
While the ripples grow, they meet others.
Many leaves fall,
And many ripples are made.
The meetings are men,
And no ripple is the same: all exist differently.
So teach the sages.

The Fỉđâ version says a lot more, as you'll see when I post the gloss tomorrow. I will say, though, that "nun" indicates a sort of gnomic. Enjoy!
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 1:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Waiting for the gloss Wink
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 9:05 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oops. I forgot about it. Here you are:

Gloss:
Leaves(S) from tree(Mp Source) Life to-fall gnomic-indicator.
They(S) in river(Mp) world to-fall gnom-ind,
And ripples(DO) to-make gnom-ind.
While ripples(S) to-grow present-ind, others(DO) to-meet pres-ind.
Many leaves(S) to-fall gnom ind,
And many ripples(S) made to-be gnom-ind.
Meetings(S) men(DO) to-be pres-ind,
And no meetings(S) same to-be pres-ind: all to-be differently pres-ind.
So/thus sages(S) to-teach gnom-ind.

Literal translation:

Tree Possessed by Life
Leaves from Life's tree fall, fell, and always will fall.
They in world's river fall, fell, etc.
And ripples make, made, and always will make.
While ripples grow now, others meet now.
Many leaves fall, fell, etc,
And many ripples made(adj) are, were, and will be.
Meetings men are now,
And no meetings two(adj) are now: all are differently now.
So/thus sages teach, taught, and always will teach.


I'm thinking of expanding the possessive case to be a more general "Genitive" but with a separate case to indicate source. You can see the source case in line 1 "forn-a-il". -a indicates possession by a male or some other object, and -il indicates source.

By the way, is this the appropriate place to post these random compositions? I suppose you guys can translate them into your own languages if you so desire.
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

killerken wrote:
By the way, is this the appropriate place to post these random compositions? I suppose you guys can translate them into your own languages if you so desire.
Eventually we want to see it written in your conscript.
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 4:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Eventually?!

I wanna see it NOW! Mr. Green

But please post it soon. ^^


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