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First Map of the Twin Kingdoms of Alirdyse and Layse

 
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kyonides



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PostPosted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 10:36 pm    Post subject: First Map of the Twin Kingdoms of Alirdyse and Layse Reply with quote

Well, it's made in Paint (or Kolourpaint if your OS has a KDE GUI), so don't expect anything beautiful, aesthetically pleasing, because you won't find it here, yet.

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Old Map


So what do you think about its shape? Does the shape of its coast look OK or not?

I wished I could have ask you for some extra feedback, but I gotta say there's nothing else you may say about it...
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 11:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Looks fine to me. What scale is it on? (Like, how big is the island?)
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 5:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't see anything wrong with it, not that I know much about maps. Could we see where on the islands these twin kingdoms are located? That would be interesting.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 31, 2009 10:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Do you see two unknown isles on the western part of the map?
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 2:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yes, I didn't notice them before. Are those where the kingdoms are? Who lives on the mainland?
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 2:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, those isles are left alone because it's too dangerous to live there due to the beasts that inhabit it.

The twin kingdoms are located in the southern area of the map.
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 9:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Interesting. The map looks really good, but perhaps it would be more appropriate to have more than just 2 islands? it seems odd that only 2 would form.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 8:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Today I posted a new map with several islands on it, I hope this time it would look a little bit more realistic. The biggest island seems to look more natural than the others... but I have no good explanation on what is it doing there...
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