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PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 8:13 pm    Post subject: Translate.... Reply with quote

Everyone translate this passage, then we will vote for the three most favourite translations (aka the ones which we deem worthy based on voter's choice, give a reason why it is worthy like sophistication or sound of it or uniqueness. Try to include X-SAMPA or IPA and also add the subcommentary on what the actual order is like:
(Preferred to just add commentary and not waste time on X-SAMPA or IPA)
(eg. I am a boy --> (Old Urobasican) Estamu filus [Is-(present ending for pronoun 'I') boy]

Okay, here we go (it will test your conlang's capabilities):

Tommy, the big bad boy, cut himself after having an argument with a long time friend - Sally. She insisted on taking him to the big hairy doctor for some vital medical treatment incase an infection would arise. However, Tommy chose not to do so, and as a consequence - his life ended. Rest in peace Tommy, he was twenty one. With a dire feeling of grief, Sally unwittingly took her own life by swallowing a handful or so of a white powder. Forensic investigations revealed there was inconclusive evidence that Sally would have been murdered by the substance which turned out to be grinded tic tacs. They believed she might have been killed. The next day, Tommy rose from the dead...

Have fun. This will be kinda tricky for some. Mr. Green
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 8:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Tommy, the big bad boy, cut himself after having an argument with a long time friend - Sally. She insisted on taking him to the big hairy doctor for some vital medical treatment incase an infection would arise. However, Tommy chose not to do so, and as a consequence - his life ended. Rest in peace Tommy, he was twenty one. With a dire feeling of grief, Sally unwittingly took her own life by swallowing a handful or so of a white powder. Forensic investigations revealed there was inconclusive evidence that Sally would have been killed by the substance which turned out to be grinded tic tacs. They believed she might have been murdered. The next day, Tommy rose from the dead...

Ùrobasican: Tommy, la graña filo mala, li l'cuiré apuè avéantai un argumento vej un amico biena-savara - Sally. El' insistéi l'prenii-d'ai la graña doctèro cevara por û vitara traîtamento medicara en caso d'un infeccion qu'i povai dèvelopi. Bienaça, Tommy choîséi q'e nen, é com un consequenço - li perdéi lia vito. Rèposio en paço Tommy, li estéi viento una. Vej una senso granda de grevo, Sally nèvej' intencion prenéi elia vito para consoméantai una complèmaño d'una podro blanca. Investigatèrós Forensica rèvièléol q'làs avai ô evidenço inconclusiva q'e Sally estiiméi enmortéi para la subastanço qu'i estéi jiús û tic tacs grindéi. Kiu suspectéol q'el' povai mordrestai. La diae proscana, Tommy levéi da morto.

[Tommy, the big boy bad, he himself cut after was-having an argument with a friend well-known - Sally. She insisted to take him to the big doctor hairy for some vital treatment medical incase of an infection which can develop. However, Tommy chose that no, and as a consequence, he lost his life. Rest in peace Tommy, he was twenty one. With a feeling great of mourning, Sally without intention took her life by was-consuming a handful of a powder white. Investigators Forensic revealed that there is some evidence inconclusive that Sally would-have-been killed by the substance which was just some tic tics grinded. They suspected that she may was-murdered. The day next, Tommy rose from death]

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Tommy, the big bad boy, cut himself after having an argument with a long time friend - Sally. She insisted on taking him to the big hairy doctor for some vital medical treatment incase an infection would arise. However, Tommy chose not to do so, and as a consequence - his life ended. Rest in peace Tommy, he was twenty one. With a dire feeling of grief, Sally unwittingly took her own life by swallowing a handful or so of a white powder. Forensic investigations revealed there was inconclusive evidence that Sally would have been killed by the substance which turned out to be grinded tic tacs. They believed she might have been murdered. The next day, Tommy rose from the dead...

Qintari: Tomi, jai dare-liku-mon, zí jyatseji-dá saru gaitaji voru yo-ga banyo laram-nian-mon - Sali. Noren báktemoji-dá surei noren yakaji-sé hana dyu Baksuga dare-lonjie-mon jyo kamasege ganji-mon dé tzoji nun dáksu yimshira niru sahsuji. Kanira, Tomi jyonji-dá kono, virutté, hana-ra kiyero nunji-dá. nyiji-ro jyo sésubui Tomi, hana surei-dá ru-dé-yo suitso. Voru gamso dádare-bosha-mon, Sali kono sottoji-dá nunji nore'-ra kiyero viru fanshyo sen-bai. Forensika didaji-suga" paruji-dá viru banjyuso i-tanasoji-dá fanshyo surei-dá jíma tic-tac" fanshyo-mon. Horu suihji surei Sali kodoksá sahtsuji. Tenn saba-mon, Tomi yenji-dá tzyu dátso.

[Tommy, boy big-bad, himself cut after arguing with a friend long-years - Sally. She insisted is she will take him to Doctor big-hairy. for treatment need so-that make stop infection if happen. However, Tommy chose no, therefore, his life ended. Repose for evermore Tommy, he was twenty-one years-old. With feeling huge-sad-like, Sally no intend to stop her life because powder white. Forensic Investigators said because evidence given-showed powder was just tic tacs powdered. They think Sally is (unfortunately) killed. Day after, Tommy rose from ground.]
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 8:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Can you move this to translations ?
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