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PostPosted: Mon Sep 21, 2009 1:45 am    Post subject: Fairytale Reply with quote

I could've sworn there was a thread somewhere around here with song translations but maybe I imagined it. At any rate, I've fallen inexplicably in love with the song that won this year's Eurovision contest: check it out
Actually, I like the performance - I like the recorded version of the song a bit better: this

So, in my new craze I spent yesterday translating it into three of my languages - Hemnlg - the Nra dialect, Ddamychal, and Tadvradcel. I was going to do ra cel as well, and then realized I had things to do and never got around to it.

Anyway.

Fairytale (by Alexander Rybak) Hemnlg, Nra dialect "Vullanne" l leksndr Rybak

Years ago when I was younger
(slnojdor lgri, hvist sol pisjen) /year-pl. bypassed, when be-PAST1-colloqual young-comparative(m)/
I kinda liked a girl I knew.
(aach humoral nur gyl men) /sort-of like-PAST girl that know-PAST1-colloquial/
She was mine, and we were sweethearts,
(bej sol fos, er sol nurfellar) /she be-PAST3f I-GEN(m), and be-PAST1 love-pl./
That was then, but then its true
(sel noo, nun so seg san) /be-PAST3m then, but well be-PRES3m true/

Im in love with a fairytale
(dyda forj vullanyyf) /do-love-PRES I-NOM(m) low-myth-ASSOC(f)/
Even though it hurts.
(nlu rruljech) /despite-but hurt-PRES/
Cause I dont care if I lose my mind;
(sufy otu po luckhu fos mnnu) /because care-PRES-NEG if misplace-TENT I-GEN(m) sanity/
Im already cursed
(jen sorj blecken) /already be-PRES1 cursed(m)/

Every day we started fighting,
(s einec hl kar dedengng) /every day-on start-PAST1-colloquial we argue-CONT/
Every night we fell in love.
(s syskyc hural kar ald) /every night-on open-PAST we love/
No one else could make me sadder,
(such isj skah nst tesken) /nobody other can-TENT make sad-comparative(m)/
But no one else could lift me high above
(nun such isj skah ry fos kand nong) /but nobody other can-TENT up I-GEN(m) spirit high/

I dont know what I was doing
(miru reb gyl delng forj) /know-PRES1-NEG what that do-PAST1-colloquial-CONT I-NOM(m)/
But suddenly we fell apart.
(nun lalsj karis hussar getvistl) /but suddenly we-of thread-pl. unravel-PAST/
Nowadays I cannot find her.
(dine skach forj glura bej) /lately can-PRES1-NEG I-NOM(m) find she/
But when I do well get a brand new start
(nun hvist ska forj steme hraaf ta kar) /but when can-PRES1 newborn(n) beginning-INST(n) go we/

Im in love with a fairytale
(dyda forj vullanyyf) /do-love-PRES I-NOM(m) low-myth-ASSOC(f)/
Even though it hurts.
(nlu rruljech) /despite-but hurt-PRES/
Cause I dont care if I lose my mind;
(sufy otu po luckhu fos mnnu) /because care-PRES-NEG if misplace-TENT I-GEN(m) sanity/
Im already cursed
(jen sorj blecken) /already be-PRES1 cursed(m)/

Shes a fairytale
(bej sog vullanyyf) /she be-PRES3f low-myth/
Yeah
(yje)
Even though it hurts.
(nlu rrulech) /despite-but hurt-PRES/
Cause I dont care if I lose my mind;
(sufy otu po luckhu fos mnnu) /because care-PRES-NEG if misplace-TENT I-GEN(m) sanity/
Im already cursed
(jen sorj blecken) /already be-PRES1 cursed(m)/


Ddamychal "Archel", ze Alekhsandar Rybakh

Years ago when I was younger
(shnan chrit iad halakha forlia) /year-pl. ago when be-PAST-I(m) comparative-young/
I kinda liked a girl I knew
(elo sa tiamakh ga-liare hillakha) /kind of I-IDOP like-able-PAST a-girl know-PAST-I(m)/
She was mine and we were sweethearts
(Arhe halakh sam ghe halakht melana) /she be-PAST-3 I-GEN and be-PAST-we lovers/
That was then, but then its true
(te halakh ho, e ir hala khoyna) /that be-PAST-3 then, but so be-PRES-3 true/

Im in love with a fairytale
(biartaa melgath talat gan-archel) /feel-PRES-I(m) in-love with a-fairytale/
Even though it hurts
(fenekhte sa bta) /although I-IDOP hurt-PRES/
Cause I dont care if I lose my mind
(rodd no-yn salaa dal bregha) /because NEG-care-PRES-I(m) if go-crazy-I(m)/
Im already cursed
(in halaa bykha) /already be-PRES-I(m) cursed/

Every day we started fighting
(hal-nigh raplakht al-hasuetach) /every day start-PAST-we fight-GERUND/
Every night we fell in love
(hal-seta amwkht al-legh) /every night eat-PAST-we the-moon/
No one else could make me sadder
(melshara tem-inaha forna) /nobody-else could-make-I-DOP comparative-sad/
But no one else could lift me high above
(ech melshara tem-ereha orerba) /but nobody-else could-raise-I-DOP high-above/

I dont know what I was doing
(no-hillaa te tal hesakh al-mykhetach) /NEG-know-PRES-I(m) that which be-PAST do-GERUND/
But suddenly we fell apart
(ech bafir tekhekht lusha) /but sudden-ly rattle-PAST-we loose/
Nowadays I cannot find her
(unn no-temoa a meighro) /lately NEG-can-PRES-I(m) INF find-INF-she-DOP/
But when I do well get a brand new start
(ech iad temoa, ghwshet ga-guir nen shana) /but when can-I(m), get-FUT-we a-start so new/

Im in love with a fairytale
(biartaa melgath talat gan-archel) /feel-PRES-I(m) in-love with a-fairytale/
Even though it hurts
(fenekhte sa bta) /although I-IDOP hurt-PRES/
Cause I dont care if I lose my mind
(rodd no-yn salaa dal bregha) /because NEG-care-PRES-I(m) if go-crazy-I(m)/
Im already cursed
(in halaa bykha) /already be-PRES-I(m) cursed/

Shes a fairytale
(arhe hala gan-archel) /she be-PRES-3 a-fairytale/
Yeah
(bra) <--- this is literally "yeah," a slangy word for "yes" /bret/
Even though it hurts
(fenekhte sa bta) /although I-IDOP hurt-PRES-3/
Cause I dont care if I lose my mind
(rodd no-yn salaa dal bregha) /because NEG-care-PRES-I(m) if go-crazy-I(m)/
Im already cursed
(in halaa bykha) /already be-PRES-I(m) cursed/


Tadvradcel "rhdhsvghs" l lcsndr Rybac

Years ago when I was younger
(ess thm dvess hysryn es lhht) /year ago when be-PAST I more-young/
I kinda liked a girl I knew
(nfsyn es brey lith ciyn es) /like-PAST I sort-ly girl know-PAST I/
She was mine and we were sweethearts
(hysryn usu ss ysth hysryn esruc thghsse) /be-PAST she mine and be-PAST we love-doer/
That was then, but then its true
(manth hysryn ytha, norh hysr vi) /that be-PAST then, but be-PRES true/

Im in love with a fairytale
(vih es rhdhsvghs) /love-PRES I fairytale/
Even though it hurts
(mrh no noesch) /even though hurt-PRES-I-it/
Cause I dont care if I lose my mind
(lef ss fsthic es no ehns ss ssrhgh) /because NEG care-PRES I if lose-PRES my mind/
Im already cursed
(ssthy hysr ghycthyn) /already be-PRES curse-PAST/

Every day we started fighting
(sss dethyn esruc bdthath) /everyday start-PAST we fight-CONT/
Every night we fell in love
(sth irth hisswn th) /each night become-PAST love/
No one else could make me sadder
(ss nyss tl lyrf be uiseses lmeld) /no-one else can-TENT INF make-INF-I more-sad/
But no one else could lift me high above
(norh ss nyss tl lyrf be ghltheses ssrusuvn) /but no-one else can-TENT INF lift-INF-I high-over/

I dont know what I was doing
(ss ci es fi manth hysryn ghimeth) /NEG know-PRES I what that be-PAST do-CONT/
But suddenly we fell apart
(norh thossnn cthuwn esruc) /but suddenly break-PAST we/
Nowadays I cannot find her
(thom ss lyrf es be thlois usu) /lately NEG can-PRES I INF find-INF she/
But when I do well get a brand new start
(norh dvess thlo es no-thsth stha lodhs) /but when find-PRES I get-FUT new start/

Im in love with a fairytale
(vih es rhdhsvghs) /love-PRES I fairytale/
Even though it hurts
(mrh no noesch) /even though hurt-PRES-I-it/
Cause I dont care if I lose my mind
(lef ss fsthic es no ehns ss ssrhgh) /because NEG care-PRES I if lose-PRES my mind/
Im already cursed
(ssthy hysr ghycthyn) /already be-PRES curse-PAST/

Shes a fairytale
(hysr usu rhdhsvghs) /be-PRES she fairytale/
Yeah
()
Even though it hurts
(mrh no noesch) /even though hurt-PRES-I-it
Cause I dont care if I lose my mind
(lef ss fsthic es no ehns ss ssrhgh) /because NEG care-PRES I if lose-PRES my mind/
Im already cursed
(ssthy hysr ghycthyn) /already be-PRES curse-PAST/


So, that was fun. Sorry if it's hard to read, being all squished together, and I feel rather certain I've made lots of mistakes. (^_^) Does anyone else like the song, or another song from the contest, or want to do a translation?
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 15, 2010 6:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry for the necromancing, but I can't believe I have missed this!
Because I loved the song, then I was fed up with it, and now I like it very much Smile
So when I get to it, I'm gonna translate it too Smile
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 16, 2010 2:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Glad there's another fan. Smile I'm looking forward to your translation!
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 12:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cypotezo:
Ava anos, qu ȷo et pıus ȷuveı,
(before year.PL, when I be.PRT COMP young.S.M)
Mı alque gut yne hılla quı ȷo sap.
(I.DAT rather like.PRT one.F girl who I know.PRT)
Essa et la mıa y etamos carıos.
(she be.PRT DEF.S.F my.S.F and be.1PL sweetheart.PL)
Et ıntnc mas era vero.
(be.PRT then but be.PRS.3S true.M)

Jo mo yn queo de hatas,
(I love.PRS.1PL one.M story GEN'DEF.PL.F fairy.PL)
Mezque mı llatma,
(although I.ACC hurt.PRS.3S)
Porque no preo ad corı s perdo mıa tetta,
(because N take.PRS.1S to heart if lose.PRS.1S my.S.F head)
Etı dıȷam madıedo.
(be.PRS.1S already curse.PART.M)

Caque dıorno comııamos luttn,
(every day start.PRT.1PL fight.GER)
Caque noxe nu epreıemos.
(every night 1PL.REFL fall.in.love.PRT.1PL)
Nınque otra no pox mı haer pıus trıtı
(no.one other N can.PRT.3P I.ACC do.INF COMP sad.S.M)
Mas nınque otra no pox mı llevar ta aıto.
(but no.one other N can.PRT I.ACC lift.INF so high)

No sapo que ȷo ha
(N know.PRS.1S what I do.1S.PRT)
Mas vrucmn nu seprıamos
(but suddenly 1PL.REFL seperate.PRT.1PL)
Odıe, no pıexo la truver
(today, N can.PRS.1S 3S.ACC find.INF)
Mas qu ȷıl hacro, avramos yne comıa nova.
(but when I'he.ACC do.FUT.1S, have.FUT.1PL one.F start new.S.F)

Jo mo yn queo de hatas,
(I love.PRS.1PL one.M story GEN'DEF.PL.F fairy.PL)
Mezque mı llatma,
(although I.ACC hurt.PRS.3S)
Porque no preo ad corı s perdo mıa tetta,
(because N take.PRS.1S to heart if lose.PRS.1S my.S.F head)
Etı dıȷam madıedo.
(be.PRS.1S already curse.PART.M)

Eta yn queo de hatas,
(be.3S one.M story GEN'DEF.PL.F fairy.PL)
Sım
(yes)
Mezque mı llatma,
(although I.ACC hurt.PRS.3S)
Porque no preo ad corı s perdo mıa tetta,
(because N take.PRS.1S to heart if lose.PRS.1S my.S.F head)
Etı dıȷam madıedo.
(be.PRS.1S already curse.PART.M)
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