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Hemicomputer · Joined: 04 Feb 2008 Posts: 610 Location: Calgary, Alberta

Updated Drumu version!

Hanalam idrit.

Ni ori ~
Hanalam del drivut
Epri sustibrak nesit
Da sakra, sibu

Ni yuri ~
Hanalam del abit
Semos abakri bolat
Da leska, sibu

Hanalat.

Gloss and script to follow.
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eldin raigmore · Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2011 2:27 pm Post subject:

LingoDingo · Admin Joined: 25 Oct 2011 Posts: 102 Location: Eastern US

Well, guys. It's time for my first translation. After searching a little bit, this was the first one I found that I could actually do.

So, what I have for you today is a translation of Tolkien_Freak's poem into Aalmoken. First, I give you it written in Aalšiknâk:

And now, in each of my four current transliterations:

Romanization:

*.šeuuk fyuuǩai.
.xajun aanai.
.šeuuk basai gwe.
.kof fniimai amâs.
.kiine iikâs giival.
.cijun aanai.
.šeuuk banai gwe.
.cik e žaf žaaikais.
.kiine iikâs muħgal.
.šeuukai.*

Cyrillization:

*.шэуук фйууҳаи.
.хаџун аанаи.
.шэуук басаи гўэ.
.коф фниимаи амӓс.
.киинэ иикӓс гиивал.
.чиџун аанаи.
.шэуук банаи гўэ.
.чик э жаф жааикаис.
.киинэ иикӓс муҁгал.
.шэуукаи.*

"Devanagarization:"

*.तलुउक् फ्यूऊख़्नाई.
.खाजून् आआनाई.
.तलुउक् फाआख्कीनाई ग्व.
.खौफ् भीनीम्नाई आहस्.
.कीईनै ईईतीकस् गीईभाल्.
.चीजून् आआनाई.
.तलुउक् बूगीनाई ग्व.
.चीक् का झाफ् फक्वाईख़्नाईछ्.
.कीईनै ईईतीकस् मूह्गाल्.
.फूम् तलुउक्नाई.*

"Bengalization:"

*.তোলূঊক্ ফ্যুউখ়্নাই.
.খাজুল্ আানাই.
.তোলূঊক্ ফাআখ্কিনাই গ্ষো.
.খফ্ ভিনিম্নাই আহোশ্.
.কিইনে ইিতিকোশ্ গিইভাল্.
.চিজুন্ আানাই.
.তোলূঊক্ বুগিনাই গ্ষো.
.চিক্ কা ঝাফ্ ফোক্ষাইখ়্নাইছ্.
.কিইনে ইিতিকোশ্ মুহ্গাল্.
.ফুম্ তোলূঊক্নাই.*

Finally, a gloss.

.rain to-precipitate(3/S/Pr).
.summer to-be(3/S/Pr).
.rain to-clean(3/S/Pr) you(ACC).
.world to-seem(3/S/Pr) calm(ADV).
.to-feel(2/S/Pr) now happy.
.winter to-be(3/S/Pr).
.rain to-hurt(3/S/Pr) you(ACC).
.ice and fire to-cut(3/Pl/Pr).
.to-feel(2/S/Pr) now sad.
.sky to-rain(3/S/Pr).

I noticed that in my translation the syllables of each line are patterned: 4,4,6,6,7,4,6,6,7,4. But other than that, nothing special.

Pulling a topic out of the casket just to put some more clothes on it, I am.

* I just noticed that I missed one voicing marker in the Aalšiknâk version and the statement markers for all of the entries. Though I've added them back to the transliterations.
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eldin raigmore · Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2011 7:19 pm Post subject:

That's good, LingoDingo! Thanks.
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