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eldin raigmore · Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 7:23 pm Post subject: TC: My Fine Hen

(Decide whether "higgledy-piggledy" is nonsense or a proper name; decide whether and how to translate it into your conlang so it fits.)

Higgledy-Piggledy, my fine hen:
She lays eggs for gentlemen.

Gentlemen come, every day,
To see what eggs my hen doth lay.

Sometimes nine, and sometimes ten:
Higgledy-Piggledy, my fine hen.
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dusepo · Joined: 12 Feb 2008 Posts: 129

Hēgeladē'pēgeladē, ngō'kēpenōha sa shān,
Sa'grebores rōnaq ta gōladotaq.

Gōldotaq gans, āthanatēm tak,
O leles qach rōnaq ngō'kēpenōha haps gebores.

Norā ngē, o norā fē,
Hēgeladē'pēgeladē, ngō'kēpenōha sa shān.

Higgeldy piggeldy (Heegeladee Peegeladee), my hen who (feminine) is fine,
She gives birth to eggs for men.

Men come, every day,
And see what eggs my hen has given birth to.

Sometimes nine, sometimes ten,
Higgeldy piggeldy (Heegeladee Peegeladee), my hen who (feminine) is fine.

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StrangeMagic · Admin Joined: 18 Apr 2007 Posts: 640

Higaldi-Pigaldi, naémart hanka ni:
Éinpal as unaga ouvi.

Anaga cliwil, stinamat,
I éinpal naémart hanka lengi ouvar balupir.

Diwa ect, oun diwa aram:
Higaldi-Pigaldi, naémart hanki ni.

Higgledy-Piggledy, my hen fine:
Eggs for gentlemen to lay-3-PRE.

Gentlemen to come-3-PLU-PRES, every day,
What eggs my hen to do-3-PRE to lay to see.

Sometimes nine, and sometimes ten:
Higgledy-Piggledy, me hen fine.

eldin raigmore · Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 7:06 pm Post subject:

@Dusepo,
@StrangeMagic;

I very much like your contributions! Thanks.
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mrtoast2 · Joined: 19 Feb 2008 Posts: 123 Location: Goromonzi

Hílgúldee Pígúldee, télvón glôtékain hékaintah,
Vén álénteegán blórtkôn édélg pénkrôtén kán drénén dér seent.

Pénkrôtén kán drénén dér seent zhénvahnhátah, dénén hétlahktón bóf tôdónkrá,
Lénkánkah lénén blórtkôn kán télvón glôtékain álsénteegan.

Bóf bílbahchtár nôbrán, rólt bóf bílbahchtár dínah,
Hígáldí Pígáldí, télvón glôtékain hékaintah.

Higgledy piggledy, my hen fine
She lays eggs for men who are of niceness.

Men who are of niceness come, the days of all,
To see the eggs that my hen lays.

With occasion nine, and with occasion ten,
Higgledy piggledy, my hen fine.
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imbecilica · Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 74

Higgledy-Piggledy, my fine hen:
She lays eggs for gentlemen.

Gentlemen come, every day,
To see what eggs my hen doth lay.

Sometimes nine, and sometimes ten:
Higgledy-Piggledy, my fine hen.

Qintari
Higúdi pigúdi, o-ra gae-mýu dotsu-mon
Jiego detsuji jangho jyo misuteru

Misuteru laiji, moida tenn
Kinji jangho nakei o-ra gae-mýu deji-dá

Asu-naesu gyo, itte osu-naesu kyan-dé
Higúdi Pigúdi, o-ra gae dotsu-mon!

eldin raigmore · Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 7:19 pm Post subject:

@MrToast2 and @Imbecilica; Thank you.
@MrToast2; thanks for the morphemic gloss, as well.
@Imbecilica; can you give us a morphemic gloss?
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imbecilica · Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 74

Hemicomputer · Joined: 04 Feb 2008 Posts: 610 Location: Calgary, Alberta

Holxûs:
Çikulti-Vikulti, kleven helm tol:
Îmarev nwkún mokv senlws kra.

Mokv senlws swl,
Gí omyutwr îmarv kúci kra.

Ríl kadu, al ríl rox:
Çikulti-Vikulti, kleven helm tanci.

Translation:
Higgledy-Piggledy, my good hen:
She makes eggs for respected men.

Respected men come,
For the seeing of her eggs.

Sometimes 9, and sometimes 10:
Higgledy-Piggledy, my good hen.

Gloss:
higgledy-piggledy, hen good 1-POSS
egg-PL make-3 man-PL respected for

man-PL respected PRES.CONST come
the see-OBJ egg-PL 3-POSS for

sometimes nine, and sometimes ten
higgledy-piggledy, hen good 1-POSS

EDIT: Did the gloss properly and made some changes to the translation of line 4. Rúicin kól, elden!

eldin raigmore · Posted: Sat May 17, 2008 9:49 pm Post subject:

mrtoast2 · Joined: 19 Feb 2008 Posts: 123 Location: Goromonzi

Edited my original translation, higgledy-piggledy should actually translate to:
Hílgúldee Pílgúldee

Not:
Hílgáldí Pígáldí

Just had a momentary brain lapse with the phonetics.
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Hemicomputer · Joined: 04 Feb 2008 Posts: 610 Location: Calgary, Alberta

Sun:
EDIT: Some phonological/grammatical/orthographic changes made.
Higaldi-Pigaldi, les joşna vojz,
Sa opatetka gast someltnol,

Somelt lad, völkajn,
Zana dol şa opatetka an sa gasthig voşt zot.

It völ kjo, it völ şen,
Higaldi-Pigaldi, les joşna vojz

Higgledy-Piggledy, good hen I-gen.al
she.sg egg-pl-acc make gentleman-pc-ben

gentleman-pauc come, day-dist.temp,
because they.M.pc def.F egg-pl-acc which she make-PAST see want

one day nine, one day ten
Higgledy-Piggledy, good hen I-gen.al

Tolkien_Freak · Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 5:46 pm Post subject:

Let's see if I can do this with Kilhiryui:

Higali-migaliye, kararyu elayei euruyei:
Hyarawat ryu kararakun auluwaki.

Euyat aulu, yirilhudhyeunakau,
Hiyawiwaki karakun hyarawatei kararyu.

Yirilhikkainakau kararakunyaun, yirilhikkainakau kararakutain:
Higali-migaliye, kararyu elayei euruyei.

/hiNali miNalije ka4a4jM elajei eM4Mjei
hja4aM\at 4jM ka4a4akMn aMlMM\aki

eMjat aMlM ji4iKMDj2nakaM
hijaM\iM\aki ka4akMn hja4aM\atei ka4a4jM

ji4iKikxainakaM ka4a4akMnjaMn ji4iKikxainakaM ka4a4akMtain
hiNali miNaliye ka4a4jM elajei eM4Mjei/

higgledy-piggledy-VOC, hen good-PTCP me-POSS-PTCP
live-HAB animal.PN[ACT] egg-STAT man-BEN

come man[ACT] sun-UNIV-TIME-LOC
see-GER-BEN egg-STAT live-HAB-PTCP hen[ACT]

sun-PAU-TIME-LOC egg-nine sun-PAU-TIME-LOC egg-ten
higgledy-piggledy-VOC, hen good-PTCP me-POSS-PTCP

I used the verb for 'to live' for 'to lay [eggs]', since 'to live' with an active subject can mean 'to give birth' or 'to cause to have life'. Also, the words for 'sun' and 'day' are the same.

eldin raigmore · Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 9:10 pm Post subject:

These are good, Hemicomputer and Tolkien_Freak!
Thanks!
Can you pronounce them?
Can you write them in your conscripts?
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Tolkien_Freak · Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 11:09 pm Post subject:

You're welcome, I need to do more stuff like this with Kilhiryui.

Hemicomputer · Joined: 04 Feb 2008 Posts: 610 Location: Calgary, Alberta

Hemicomputer · Joined: 04 Feb 2008 Posts: 610 Location: Calgary, Alberta

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Tolkien_Freak · Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 10:38 pm Post subject: