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PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 8:00 am    Post subject: Things To Write in Your Conscript/Conlang Reply with quote

Here, we can collaborate a range of texts and phrases for people to translate. It will help you experiment with your script/lang especially when you're stuck on what to write.

    As soon as the door opened, a mouse ran in. A black cat followed. The mouse climbed up the shocked lady’s skirt. The cat did too. The woman gave the cat a beating.

    My God, I love Thee, not because I hope for Heaven thereby, nor yet because who love Thee not must die eternally, but solely because Thou art my God and my eternal King.

    Inside a hall, when you look directly up the centre, you are able to see a hidden room. Move one step to any direction and it disappears. There is no known route up to that room.

    Outside, on a certain spot upon the ground and look up you can see the sun directly above, the trees are positioned so that you only see the Sun a few times a year.

    One bright day, late at night,
    Two dead boys rose up to fight.
    Back to back, they faced each other,
    Drew their swords, and shot each other.
    A deaf policeman heard the noise
    And came and killed those two dead boys.
    If you don't believe this lie is true
    Just ask the blind man -- he saw it too.


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PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2007 7:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice! I'll post mine soon.
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PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2007 12:40 am    Post subject: Re: Things To Write in Your Conscript/Conlang Reply with quote

StrangeMagic wrote:
    As soon as the door opened, a mouse ran in. A black cat followed. The mouse climbed up the shocked lady’s skirt. The cat did too. The woman gave the cat a beating.


Ok, here it is in Alurhsa (roman letters, if I get ambitious, I'll do it up in the Alurhsa, V'sul, and Asketan scripts and scan them. But that might not be for a bit...):

Svlarre hólyelé zhë tháles, zól tsedlásû. Nvel fìlshä seqû. Mlúzhelû zhë zól tìshán zhë gászóláyá tháváyá. Tsú zhë fìlshä. Zhë thává grúçelû zhë fìlshän.
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PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2007 3:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice! ^_^

The conlang seems very unique, is it more of an outworldly conlang? I really like it!

I believe that a mouse - zól and a cat is fìlshä.
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PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 4:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

StrangeMagic wrote:
Nice! ^_^

The conlang seems very unique, is it more of an outworldly conlang? I really like it!

I believe that a mouse - zól and a cat is fìlshä.


Indeed, zól is mouse (well, a mouse-like creature) and fìlshä is a small member of the feline genus (rather like our domestic cat). Very good!

And yes, Alurhsa is spoken by the race of the same name, natives of a world they refer to as Álurhná, circling a star rather on the edge (almost more in a small globular cluster) and off the galactic plane of the Andromeda galaxy. The Alurhsa people are human appearing, but with a few external, and more internal, differences.

The Alurhsa language is quite extensively documented, although I'm nowhere near done (is it possible for a conlang to ever truly be "completely done"? Wink ). I have about 65 pages of grammar, 8000+ words, and a pretty good amount of written material *in* the language, most of which unfortunately is my own personal journals which I've kept in Alurhsa for years now. But I do have translations of some smaller books and chapters from the Bible, shorter passages from some other faiths' scriptures, some general translation, and even a couple of short stories, all written in Alurhsa.
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PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 5:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That's amazing! Show us sometime.
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PostPosted: Sun May 13, 2007 12:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Serali wrote:
That's amazing! Show us sometime.


Show you which?

An example story is here: http://alurhsa.org/language/journey-of-halyihev-alurhsa.pdf

That's about 16 pages or so, handwritten, in Alurhsa. It's a story I wrote as a final paper for a class. The story tells the "mythic journey" of my conlanging life, and it seemed only right to tell that first in Alurhsa, and then translate it to English.

I have the English version here: http://alurhsa.org/language/journey-of-halyihev-english.pdf

You can see the Alurhsa grammar at: http://alurhsa.org/language/Alurhsa-Grammar.pdf. That might be a slightly old version, I think it's missing the section on irregular verbs, for example.

The dictionary is at:
http://alurhsa.org/language/Alurhsa-English.pdf
and
http://alurhsa.org/language/English-Alurhsa.pdf

And of course the whole set is at my website, which is listed in my sig.
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PostPosted: Sun May 13, 2007 9:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow! Your conlang is one of the most complete I have ever seen. You have done an amazing job! ^_^

Are you planning to use Alurhsa in a story? Or is it just something that is of your interest?
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PostPosted: Sun May 13, 2007 5:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you so much!
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PostPosted: Sun May 13, 2007 11:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

StrangeMagic wrote:
Wow! Your conlang is one of the most complete I have ever seen. You have done an amazing job! ^_^

Are you planning to use Alurhsa in a story? Or is it just something that is of your interest?


It is the language of my soul. I'm not writing a story in which Alurhsa might figure, it's more like the Alurhsa culture, history, etc. including the language is in the core of my being, and I'm recording and sharing what I can of it.

Ok, yes, that sounds really New-Age, but there you have it.
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PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2007 2:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I know how you feel. I feel the same way with every script and conlang I make.
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PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2007 3:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lol, New-Age... I guess I'm part of that movement... being a Wiccan Smile.

Anyway, I know what you mean! It is really amazing to enter a world that can potentially exist, almost like astral forming into another place. ^^
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PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2007 6:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Exactly. I remember I had a dream about a Tanga Iri city called Dælan /daIlan/ and I saw every thing written in the Tanga Iri script and I heard people speaking in it ( I was talking to some one in Tanga Iri ) about 2 common species of Zivos ( one of my con butterfly like insects ).

It was cool!
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PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2007 7:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow! That must have been a truly amazing experience! ^_^

My conlang is very undeveloped in my opinion, the story to go with it is only about half-way completed. It is taking quite long but there is still a lot of time.
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PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2007 7:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

From Eldin Raigmore:

My God, I love Thee, not because I hope for Heaven thereby, nor yet because who love Thee not must die eternally, but solely because Thou art my God and my eternal King".
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PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2007 8:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

StrangeMagic wrote:
From Eldin Raigmore:

My God, I love Thee, not because I hope for Heaven thereby, nor yet because who love Thee not must die eternally, but solely because Thou art my God and my eternal King".


Á lháls-Jìne, wágálÿ Ólnen, ñe ens lhásvâ úmázhëxná yáqâ zhë Kálrÿíszán, ñó tsú ens deshâ móghâ ás seváná te ñe Ólnen wágô, ne¿á sùlme ens Ólnen delzyû lháls-Jìne ddá lháls-Nár sevánsá.

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Oh my-God, I-love Thee[ACC. Divine], not because-of to-hope by-this to-reach the Spirit-World[ACC], nor also because-of to-must to-die until forever that[relative] not Thee[ACC. Divine] he-loves, but-rather only because-of Thee[ACC. Divine] to be my-God and my-King eternal.
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PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2007 8:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Serali wrote:
Exactly. I remember I had a dream about a Tanga Iri city called Dælan /daIlan/ and I saw every thing written in the Tanga Iri script and I heard people speaking in it ( I was talking to some one in Tanga Iri ) about 2 common species of Zivos ( one of my con butterfly like insects ).

It was cool!


I have occasionally dreamed of Alurhna, though not as often as I would like. I have also had dreams in Alurhsa. My personal blog, which I don't update much now that I have the Alurhsa one, has a description of that.

Tsiasuk-Pron, however, has dreamed in Itlani quite extensively, I believe.
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PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2007 8:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I would imagine he would since he uses it in his post on the ZBB and to write in his journals.
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PostPosted: Tue May 15, 2007 6:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I had a dream of a fantasy world yesterday, but my conlang wasn't there, neither was the conworld, lol. It was quite strange, and there was a lot of magic. You can use the below as a translation challenge thing.

Inside a hall, when you look directly up the centre, you are able to see a hidden room. Move one step to any direction and it disappears. There is no known route up to that room.

Outside, on a certain spot upon the ground and look up you can see the sun directly above, the trees are positioned so that you only see the Sun a few times a year.


I'm unsure of how long it takes for the Sun to be visible, but I visualised the Sun moving across many times, only a few where seen clearly. It seemed more like a documentary!
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PostPosted: Tue May 15, 2007 11:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

halyihev wrote:
StrangeMagic wrote:
From Eldin Raigmore:

My God, I love Thee, not because I hope for Heaven thereby, nor yet because who love Thee not must die eternally, but solely because Thou art my God and my eternal King".


Á lháls-Jìne, wágálÿ Ólnen, ñe ens lhásvâ úmázhëxná yáqâ zhë Kálrÿíszán, ñó tsú ens deshâ móghâ ás seváná te ñe Ólnen wágô, ne¿á sùlme ens Ólnen delzyû lháls-Jìne ddá lháls-Nár sevánsá.

(gloss)
Oh my-God, I-love Thee[ACC. Divine], not because-of to-hope by-this to-reach the Spirit-World[ACC], nor also because-of to-must to-die until forever that[relative] not Thee[ACC. Divine] he-loves, but-rather only because-of Thee[ACC. Divine] to be my-God and my-King eternal.

I knew you'd done this (thanks), but I couldn't find it through any of the links/sites in your sig. Should I have been able to?
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